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Post by fee18 on Jun 7, 2009 1:35:01 GMT -5
Very good, I especially loved the rhyme scheme, it rolled perfectly with the theme of the poem, beautiful write.
Fee
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Post by fee18 on Feb 23, 2009 14:50:40 GMT -5
Very well put Stuart.
I think I was away when that 'rude' person was around.
Fee
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Post by fee18 on Feb 5, 2009 14:47:21 GMT -5
Congradulations Greason,
you did a very good job, and I'm sure your mom is very proud of you.
Fee
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Post by fee18 on Feb 5, 2009 14:44:42 GMT -5
Wow, What happened? I was wondering why I havent been seeing his name.... We will all miss him very much Fee
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Post by fee18 on Nov 14, 2008 14:18:34 GMT -5
Believe it or not, I actualy hate myspace. I pick on my boyfriend for having an account. Your definately right that myspace has no passion. Like Stewie says on Family guy 'I use other people's creations and make them my own to express myself' where as on here It's nothing but our own creations.
My muse is mostly emotion, like when I'm depressed, or angry. or sometimes I come up with poems when I'm giving people advice. Or sometimes, it just comes to me.
Fee
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Post by fee18 on Nov 13, 2008 1:02:40 GMT -5
yeah, sometimes I come up with poems when I'm replying to others. I think that's how I came up with 'Dark Melody' or it could be another one
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Post by fee18 on Nov 13, 2008 0:06:27 GMT -5
I agree with you. but it's alot easier said than done. It would be really cool if this site was the 'myspace' if the poetry world.
And as the rules say, for every poem you post, you need to reply to another, but every body should just feel free to reply to alot of them, not just one so they can feel better posting their poem.
Some days I dont post, I just go through and reply to others. I know lately I havent been on, but my computer is broken, and it's going to take alot of money that we dont have to fix, right now I'm on a friend's lap top.
Every body loves input whether you like the poem or not, but if not, please be nice about it; 'constructive criticisim' Tell why you didnt like the poem, and sujestions to fix it.
I see on here alot of the same people replying to every post, I hardly ever see anybody else replying to posts, and it saddens me because I like alot of different opinions, and i like to see new faces... well on here it would be screen names. lol
I'm going to stop babbling now before this turns into a long reply lol
Fee
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Post by fee18 on Nov 8, 2008 18:31:46 GMT -5
Thank you Belinda, I'll send you the pix when I can. Or I'll try again. I just had all 4 wisdom teeth removed and I'm really sore. so right now I'm not going to look up the pix again. maybe when I'm feeling better
Thanks Fee
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Post by fee18 on Sept 10, 2008 14:34:59 GMT -5
Hey Belinda,
I cant get the stupid thing to work (pertaining to the subject). Nothing is working for me!!! I'm getting so frustraited!!! Could you tell me if I'm doing something wrong? (though I've done it many times before) or I can pm the image to you.
Gah!!!!! fee
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Post by fee18 on Aug 2, 2008 14:19:07 GMT -5
I agree. I've noticed that the same people reply to every post and I know there are way more poets on here than those select few.
Fee
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Post by fee18 on Jan 20, 2007 0:13:51 GMT -5
I dont get it
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Post by fee18 on Sept 15, 2005 19:13:19 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by fee18 on Sept 14, 2005 20:05:17 GMT -5
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Post by fee18 on Sept 14, 2005 19:19:56 GMT -5
Heres how I like to get inspired:
- I take life situations that anybody could go through and put myself there. take suicide for example, I write about what the person might be thinking, or what somebody else would be thinking
- I listen to songs to get me in the creative mood, like if I want to write a poem about killing - I listen to morbid songs
- I look at my life and write about how I feel that maybe I wouldn't let people know or my life's dreams
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Post by fee18 on Feb 25, 2007 0:21:31 GMT -5
YAy Belinda!!!!!! good Job!! I'm very happy for you!!!
Fee
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Post by fee18 on Feb 4, 2007 19:36:43 GMT -5
Not much different from what I imagined. lol I love all the beer in the first one
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