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Post by kinger on Jul 3, 2004 11:37:42 GMT -5
It is called a zen haiku because a zen garden has 3 groups of rocks: one of 3; one of 5; and one of 7. So in the zen haiku you have a line of each length but in no particular order...
so 3 5 7 in any order, give it a shot!
------------------- here's mine...
confession deep within our souls purity blooms from the heart
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Post by Belinda on Jul 3, 2004 13:37:49 GMT -5
Elated Validated Self Words affecting attitude DID I DO IT RIGHT?
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Post by kinger on Jul 3, 2004 15:18:00 GMT -5
Yep looks great to me! I like how you went smallest to largest like me..Its a good way to go because then your first line is like and introduction word..and then u grow from there...Lol im rambling..anyways great job
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Post by Belinda on Jul 3, 2004 15:35:16 GMT -5
Very True about the title But it really works in all orders
Words affecting attitude Validated Self Elated
Validated Self Elated Words affecting attitude
Elated Words affecting attitude Validated Self
Validated Self Words affecting attitude Elated
I think that's what makes this Haiku so cool ;D
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Post by kinger on Jul 3, 2004 20:42:15 GMT -5
Wow, thats very cool how it works all ways! Mine pretty much does too, lol prob most would ur right... Any other takers?
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Post by Jessica2007USC on Jul 4, 2004 16:58:42 GMT -5
At the edge is where I stand tears run down my face decisions
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Post by kinger on Jul 4, 2004 19:48:32 GMT -5
WEll done Jessica!
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Post by felloff on Jul 6, 2004 17:32:39 GMT -5
Delicate a slight breeze stirs me fragile trust is imploding
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Post by kinger on Jul 6, 2004 17:44:56 GMT -5
Aweosme Zen, thanks for trying the ways of the zen in this challenge, yours was great
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Post by felloff on Jul 6, 2004 17:53:16 GMT -5
Thanks for the concept kinger. Enjoyed the Zen challenge!!! Thanks
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Post by kinger on Jul 6, 2004 18:09:18 GMT -5
no problem, you should come check out the never ending haiku game in "just for fun"..lol its soo fun!! Hope you post there
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Post by Belinda on Jul 9, 2004 10:46:32 GMT -5
Like a storm gone by Powerful emotions fade Jealousy
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Post by kinger on Jul 16, 2004 17:34:24 GMT -5
Trina! Another great one! Way to go!
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Post by Belinda on Jul 16, 2004 21:48:37 GMT -5
why...thank you ;D
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Post by kinger on Jul 22, 2004 10:29:43 GMT -5
Potery filled with flower Aligned here On the porch of love
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Post by kinger on Jul 22, 2004 10:32:26 GMT -5
Sundrops soothe Graciously beams heat Summers joy tanned with beauty
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Post by Belinda on Jul 25, 2004 20:29:29 GMT -5
Hey...Your pretty good at these yourself
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Post by kinger on Jul 26, 2004 12:20:09 GMT -5
why thank you Trina ;D
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Post by PoeticWhispers on Jul 30, 2004 8:03:15 GMT -5
( heh heh an old classic of mine:) )
Deception Sultry kisses in the dark Rose petals descend.
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Post by PoeticWhispers on Jul 30, 2004 8:07:04 GMT -5
Oh and Evan... uh... man you're gifted dude! lol ;D That one was not great.... not awesome... ah ha! intoxicating! lol
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Post by PoeticWhispers on Aug 4, 2004 4:39:24 GMT -5
Solitary confessions Empty party's guest Depression.
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Post by Belinda on Aug 4, 2004 7:55:02 GMT -5
Your good SoulPoetryGeneral
especially liked your classic one Brilliant
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Post by kinger on Aug 4, 2004 7:55:20 GMT -5
ay James, you know the ways of the Zen garden, great zen-ku's! oh and thanks for the compliment
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Post by Belinda on Dec 16, 2004 11:05:28 GMT -5
Haven't done one of these in awhile For all choices that are made Tomorrow unfolds Understand
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Post by innervision on Jul 12, 2005 21:16:43 GMT -5
no remorse this burning fire alive with blazing passion
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