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Post by AlluraD on Jan 18, 2005 9:55:50 GMT -5
Morning licks the sky while in her light I slumber dreaming of the dark
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Post by anna maria on Jan 19, 2005 3:00:29 GMT -5
cool ..
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Post by Belinda on Jan 21, 2005 4:07:31 GMT -5
Fantastic Write A definition I found that may help others: Senyru
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rt
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Post by rt on Aug 21, 2005 3:30:05 GMT -5
Elements which are important in Haiku (and by association Senryu) are the juxtaposition in line three or, on occasion, between line 1 and lines 2&3. That is to say, the ooooo or ahhh factor, the moment that makes you see the other side....run-on sentences do not provide for that and whilst this poem is appealing, it holds no surprise, therefore I do not consider it a senryu - I am sorry
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Post by shelley on Jan 22, 2006 9:29:27 GMT -5
Hi Allura,
A beautiful senryu. I enjoyed reading this one.
Shelley
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Post by Antipodi on Nov 18, 2008 18:34:16 GMT -5
GDay wow what a bewt piece a true poet you are
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