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Post by plattem on Nov 18, 2007 6:23:51 GMT -5
Verdant lanes of growth Bent backs over harvest time Gathering green gold.
Ordered rows of lush Uprooted lanes leaving brown Framed by undone green.
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Post by graesonbelinda on Nov 18, 2007 9:51:14 GMT -5
Farming--it seems like a very hard job. You have described it very well in this Haiku.
Belinda
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Post by KmarieB on Dec 2, 2007 13:20:21 GMT -5
I'm not a big fan of haiku's because I think they are either good or they are bad. Any many cannot seem to accomplish a good one, But I think you did so very well. The imagery and the colors are vivid. Great great job.
-Kaitlyn
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Post by twilightpen on Apr 28, 2008 22:08:33 GMT -5
i liked the first more than the second stanza
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Post by Antipodi on Nov 18, 2008 18:36:57 GMT -5
GDay Bewt brushed graphics in verse lots of images for the readers to see in such a short write
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