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Post by alaska on Jun 26, 2008 13:33:16 GMT -5
Attunement foray, My consciousness starts to fray. Je suis desole..
the translation of "je suis desole" in French is "im sorry"
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Post by graesonbelinda on Jun 27, 2008 21:05:54 GMT -5
These three lines speak volumes. I really like your middle verse--something I think everyone can relate too.
Belinda
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Post by unveilingdominion on Sept 10, 2008 13:28:55 GMT -5
Oh bravo, brilliant brilliant oh how I love haiku. If you can master haiku you can really learn how to master your poetry skills if you ask me, speaking volumes with few words. haiku and short poems I most appreciate, thanks for sharing this.
~ Kim
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