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Post by Matt on Jun 19, 2005 12:31:42 GMT -5
Human Bushku is pretty much like Haiku, only there are 11 sylabelles, in patterns like this: 1st Line: 3 sylabelles 2nd Line: 5 sylabelles 3rd Line: 3 Sylabelles Very simple, and kind of fun. Here's an example: Now you have a try at it.
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Post by Belinda on Jun 19, 2005 13:55:09 GMT -5
Very Cool Matt
hmmm...let me give it a go
Peering eyes Burn straight to my soul Lonely wolf
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Post by innervision on Jul 12, 2005 22:40:20 GMT -5
looming grasp devouring light in shadows
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Post by Belinda on Jul 13, 2005 11:43:07 GMT -5
oh, I like yours innervision
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rt
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Post by rt on Aug 21, 2005 3:18:53 GMT -5
If it must be 3 5 3 and is not optional, "devouring light" does not qualify this poem as a Bushku. de-vour-ing-light = 4
Also, syllables is the correct spelling ,Matt, just for future reference.
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Post by Belinda on May 12, 2006 14:35:17 GMT -5
Thanks ragdoll
hmmm I thought devouring light was 5 too de vo ur ing light
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Post by The Yin The Yang on Aug 27, 2006 13:58:58 GMT -5
In the sea Worldy thoughts are lost Forgotten
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Post by Belinda on Sept 8, 2006 2:27:48 GMT -5
Bravo Very good
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Post by unveilingdominion on Sept 8, 2006 9:50:54 GMT -5
let me try...
Tender kiss Petals carve my skin Missing breath
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Post by Belinda on Sept 8, 2006 10:48:55 GMT -5
Hot Sizzle
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Post by unveilingdominion on Sept 8, 2006 11:25:03 GMT -5
Thank you Trina! I love these hot sizzling haikus - only I find myself refraining a bit.. ha.. I know.. scary - but i don't wanna get banned from here either lol
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Post by Belinda on Sept 9, 2006 13:36:29 GMT -5
LOL
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Post by The Yin The Yang on Sept 17, 2006 15:46:14 GMT -5
Lol and well written Kim.
-Luke
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