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Post by Dark is Light on Jan 2, 2008 23:57:59 GMT -5
like a tsunami the living tide consumes all my gray breath unfolds
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Post by graesonbelinda on Jan 7, 2008 12:54:02 GMT -5
I love Haiku's--this one describes how a tsunami destroys
Belinda
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Post by twilightpen on Apr 28, 2008 21:39:42 GMT -5
no Belinda this ku talks of growing old it to me tsunami---very strong force unstoppable living tide------- people growing old also unstoppable gray unfolds------- as in hair? again suggesting the unstoppable aging process
in my humble opinion this is a senryu it gives more of the human element than the traditional haiku which has a similar set of rules but one major difference is that haiku should have a seasonal element i do enjoy ku poems and this one is very well written,,,,,twi
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