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Post by Dark is Light on Jan 6, 2008 15:26:40 GMT -5
a monster, demon a curse and a pretender a human by rights
I am what I am as fate kindly dictated without empathy
I hoped I could hide in frozen tears of Nature by spreading fake wings
the sight burned my eyes I blemished the sacred earth not a snow angel
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Post by graesonbelinda on Jan 7, 2008 12:55:34 GMT -5
I love how you made a haiku poem. Sometimes people have a hard time writing a haiku poem with more than one stanza. Very good job.
Belinda
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Post by Dark is Light on Jan 7, 2008 19:09:57 GMT -5
Haiku happen to be my favorite poems to write. Half of the ones I write have multiple stanzas. I just like the way haiku constricts you to a certain number of syllables and lines. It forces you to think more creatively than you would have in order to say something in just the right way because the options are so limited.
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Post by plattem on Jan 7, 2008 21:24:12 GMT -5
I totally agree with you about why haiku's are so attractive both on reading and in writing them.
I enjoyed yours and I think it has great melody within its body.
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Post by twilightpen on Apr 28, 2008 21:33:47 GMT -5
i too enjoy haiku and will post some soon i tend to be more traditional in writing them but have been known to break the rules from time to time
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