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Dec 25, 2003 0:12:53 GMT -5
Post by anna maria on Dec 25, 2003 0:12:53 GMT -5
stetch across sand dunes wind blown weather tossed ,lonely ill pass through seasons.
********************************** leave behind footprints reach for summits that loom merge blue skies, eternal.
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Feb 14, 2004 0:13:58 GMT -5
Post by Risk on Feb 14, 2004 0:13:58 GMT -5
You've got a talent for capturing moments. That last one seems to be a 5-6-6 but I know moving "merge" to the line above would make it read akward. Would it be possible for you to make an audio?
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Mar 14, 2004 1:43:43 GMT -5
Post by anna maria on Mar 14, 2004 1:43:43 GMT -5
was going thru the haikus bit..and gosh u'd asked me if i could make an audio..i dont know .. feel free to do one after telling me..lol.ok?
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