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Post by theREAPER on Jan 10, 2004 9:01:13 GMT -5
Walking alone so Pretty snowfall at my door I dance with winter
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Post by Belinda on Mar 5, 2004 13:08:21 GMT -5
I got a pic of walking through a snowy day But then the door gives a 2nd image the 3rd line fits the first
Hope that makes sense.
the 5-7-5 is there, but ideally you want 1 image protrayed!
Just what I got...Others may get a different image that fits all lines together!
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forbidden17fruit
Absolute Poet
don't frown; you never know who is falling in love w/ your smile!
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Post by forbidden17fruit on Mar 6, 2004 23:44:28 GMT -5
oh that was a really good poem! awesome job!
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