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Post by im2moonbaby on Mar 2, 2004 3:53:44 GMT -5
Clouds roll at fronts edge Springs rage tummelts downward hard New growth appears aft
Well, this is the first time I have attempted this format of writing. Not quite sure if I have it or not. Feedback Please!
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Post by Belinda on Mar 5, 2004 13:05:19 GMT -5
You got it ;D
5-7-5 and a defined image! Good Write!
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