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Mar 16, 2004 0:33:07 GMT -5
Post by anna maria on Mar 16, 2004 0:33:07 GMT -5
the spider's laced home dew-drop studded and gleaming invites entices me.
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Mar 18, 2004 14:52:51 GMT -5
Post by Belinda on Mar 18, 2004 14:52:51 GMT -5
I got 6-6-5 But I love the last line invites entices me
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Mar 18, 2004 23:29:40 GMT -5
Post by anna maria on Mar 18, 2004 23:29:40 GMT -5
dear Trina well ive modified the first line..the the second is 7 syllables itself i think.. ty .. hope its perfect..now..as a haiku tht is
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Mar 19, 2004 3:28:32 GMT -5
Post by Belinda on Mar 19, 2004 3:28:32 GMT -5
It's great ;D Nice editing!
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