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Post by POETRYMD on Aug 6, 2006 23:27:51 GMT -5
While traveling in the fast lane of life I had a quick conversation with my wife The shortest distance between two points is fine Of course that would be known as a straight line Light years between the galaxies Heavenly bodies race to ecstasies The visible creation in our sight Is limited to the speed of light As she stepped on my words I almost choked Like my poetic license had been revoked She said that is more than I need to know Step on the accelerator and let’s go
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Post by farkas1 on Aug 6, 2006 23:43:34 GMT -5
Hi
Nice piece of writing. It was a fun read.
Farkas1
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Post by Poetical on Aug 7, 2006 20:41:32 GMT -5
A nice bit of funny wit,also loved the metered flow, catchy with rhyme, I enjoyed this, it's always the nagging wife who can really get up your goat.ha ha well done!
Paul
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Post by Britni on Sept 2, 2006 14:22:49 GMT -5
This is good. I usually am not entertained by humorous poetry unless it's really good, and you pulled it off.
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