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Post by reasonrhymer on Apr 3, 2007 2:56:08 GMT -5
just playing with a couple words here. Ability
Response-ability, whole, integrity, total unity, I did it, yes, it was me. What can I do, to make it up to you?
Victim-ability, total instability, broken, apathy, You did it, it wasn’t me. Can’t you see, what you did to me! George
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Post by graesonbelinda on Apr 3, 2007 7:41:04 GMT -5
George
I love this. The flow, form, everything. Your words are just so true and emotions just pour out--amazing how 2 words can have so many different meanings!
Belinda
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Post by KmarieB on Apr 3, 2007 8:51:43 GMT -5
I like the structure you use...it is very unique! I dont know what it is but it caught my attention- "Can't see you, what you did to me" amazing!
Great write!
-Kaitlyn
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Ability
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Post by dechiraju on May 24, 2007 19:45:16 GMT -5
this is very short and more powerful write egroeg.
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